How far are you along with this version? Stats look ok; I'd put more points in cha, but that's a judgment call. I ask because I think you'd benefit from switching around finesse and twf so you can take finesse first. The benefits of twf aren't that great until you get at least improved, and you might be using a shield at low levels anyway. Finesse will help you right away.
I also see you don't have improved crit. I really think you should fit that in somewhere; it's a great feat for any combat class. I'd certainly take it over toughness (which you can get on the Minos helm anyway), and probably even greater twf.
I can swap twf with Finesse...good call. I see what you mean about Improved Crit. I will drop toughness for it. However, I couldn't see dropping GTWF.
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